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Could you add a description to this?

I thought the immersion of it was very good and the story was well written and my only issue was the linear gameplay as I felt I had no choice in what I do

thank you for your comment I will definitely add more decisions that you as the audience can make 

The game setting is great and the story base is good just needs bit more expressive grammar and vocabulary so the game really feels like the characters will come alive, over all a fairly good story base and set of characters.

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thank you for your comment i will definitely add more expressive grammar to my story